100 Tuesdays
Written for #OLN in honor of dVerse poets celebrating #week100 Â
June 11
dVerse, Free Verse
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Hello everyone;
I did say "haphazardly" participating in the April PAD Challenge. This is why day one is being posted after day two.
Day 1 prompt of "write an optimistic poem"
Not Dead Yet, Me
Is it really such a tragedy
that my sentences are raggedy
words tread together by similarity?
The conversation is still defiantly
expressions of me.
Is it really such a travesty
that I wander aimlessly?
When I can travel through time so easily
…our life history
…a life lived outrageously.
Is it really such a disparity
that I have forgotten the melody
of your name? Still there’s some clarity….
I know the feelings of family
and passions intensity.
Is it really such an indignitythat something once familiar is now a novelty.
Or that simple tasks escape me.
I still dance to life’s jamboree
and sing majestically.
Is it really such a finality
even as I become more absentee?
There is plenty of life in my legacy.
Don’t bother writing my eulogy,
when there’s still time to create a memory.
©2024 Delaina Miller
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The moving text is a new twist, but ti does make the poem difficult to read.
Thanks for being part of the 100th OLN.
Cheers Tony;
I think you could be right about reading the poem itself. I like the movement, but think I will change the rate.
Thanks for reading. Cheers!
This is great 🙂
Thank you and so was yours 🙂 Be well, and thanks for reading 🙂
…ah, i , too, was more amazed with the manner of presentation you exerted… odd but not at all disturbing… it was actually rather entertaining… what fun… smiles…
Thanks Kelvin;.
I glad you liked, its a whole new twist to poetry in motion
how cool is that…how did you manage to make the letters move…first i thought it’s because i’m so tired and they start swimming before my eyes you know…smiles…happy oln 100…smiles
Thanks Claudia:
Just putting my Library Science degree to some use. I just adding a html marquee code into the lines. I thought it would put a fun spin on the “mimic paper of zeros and ones”
Thanks for reading!
How’d you do that?
Just some special html coding. Do you want the code?
Thank you for the lovely post ~ My eyes were running after the words ha, like dribbling the ball ~
Good to see you at the pub ~
Cheers Grace;
I hope your eyes relax after reading mine. Your poem was fantastic. Cheers!
ok now you are messing with me….ha…
your words are moving…and i was sure that i had just read too many poems and now they were dancing..lol…that is so cool…smiles….thank you for being a part of it…
Thanks for letting me mess with your brain a bit. I want tonight’s poem to be special. 😉
Wow, this is very clever. It had my head spinning a bit, but the message was well expressed! Kudos to you on the presentation.
Thanks Mary;
I was just wanted to add some special spacing and whatnot. I could not figure out the html code for that so I found an alternative. 🙂
Thanks for reading and commenting.