Daydream Breeze

Daydream Breeze

Kelvin S.M. Naughty Wind
(Inspired by Kelvin S.M.’s Naughty Wind)

The wind carries your jasmine smell
lolling me in a daydream sleep
to a field of tulips and butterflies.
Running and singing
in spring’s breeze we let
our walls and clothing fall.
Bushy plants entangle
our underwear, flags of surrender
waving in the wind.
Under the golden sun
we sip honeysuckle
from our flesh.
Feather soft
our laughter floats
and rests in purple heather seas.

Created and shared with dVerse: POETICS: DOMINANT IMPRESSION IN ARTISTIC DESCRIPTION

This poem can now be found in The Unique & Sundry, which happens to be available on Amazon.

42 replies
  1. brian miller
    brian miller says:

    ha…some nice rhyming in there…bushy plants entangle our underpants…ha…sip honeysuckle off the flesh…now that is def a treat…enjoyable trip through your verse today…

  2. Kelvin S.M.
    Kelvin S.M. says:

    …truly wonderful offering… like the calming & soothing effect you produced with your words… and i can smell the jasmine in there.. and clearly see the clothing fall & sway… i can hear those laughter well… very engaging and find it perfect for the artwork… thank you…. i enjoyed it… smiles…

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Kelvin I owe you so much. Your art work is inspiring.
      Thank you for letting us dance our words around your art!

  3. alan1704
    alan1704 says:

    Under the golden sun
    we sip honeysuckle
    off our flesh.

    Amazing lines – just very special – 🙂

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Kathleen two of my favorite scents and with a foot of snow on the ground I am dreaming of spring. Thank you for reading and commenting!

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Henry;
      Kelvin’s art was very inspiring for me. The words just fluttered on to paper. Thanks for your kind words. Cheers!

  4. Polly
    Polly says:

    Your work is new to me Delaina and I love this poem. Started to say ‘I esp like …’ but d’you know what? I love each and every word, line and stanza ~ simply beautiful

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Polly;
      Last night the the first time I had visited your blog as well. It is nice to t get to know your voice as well. Cheers!

  5. Bjorn
    Bjorn says:

    I feel all warm and sunny inside, so packed with wonderful words… Honeysuckle … Please come summer 😉

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Bjorn;
      I am missing summer too. We have a foot of snow on the ground and more on it way. I miss tulips 🙂
      Thank you for taking the time to read and respond 🙂

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Marina for reading and commenting. Yes I am ready for winter to pass and some warmer days. Cheers!

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