November 8

If You Were My Daughter

Poetry

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Hello everyone;

I did say "haphazardly" participating in the April PAD Challenge. This is why day one is being posted after day two.
Day 1  prompt of "write an optimistic poem"

Not Dead Yet, Me


Is it really such a tragedy

that my sentences are raggedy

words tread together by similarity?

The conversation is still defiantly

expressions of me.


Is it really such a travesty 

that I wander aimlessly?

When I can travel through time so easily

…our life history

…a life lived outrageously.


Is it really such a disparity

that I have forgotten the melody

of your name? Still there’s some clarity….

I know the feelings of family

and passions intensity. 


Is it really such an indignity

that something once familiar is now a novelty.

Or that simple tasks escape me.

I still dance to life’s jamboree

and sing majestically.

Is it really such a finality

even as I become more absentee?

There is plenty of life in my legacy.

Don’t bother writing my eulogy,

when there’s still time to create a memory.

©2024 Delaina Miller

*Disclaimer This poem is not a reflection of any of the Mothers that may read and follow this blog. Its creation was kindled by a friend’s poem and stories I have heard from two friends. Thank you!
If You Were My Daughter

I would have held you close to me
at every stage of your life…
if you were my daughter

I would have played show and tell with my love for you
instead of leaving you to impress me…
if you were my daughter

I would have made you laugh
instead of hushing you…
if you were my daughter

I would have kissed all of scrapes and bruises away
instead of causing them…
if you were my daughter

I would have praise all of your achievements
instead of ignoring your success…
if you were my daughter

I would have cried with you
instead of telling you, you deserved it…
if you were my daughter

I would have nurtured your special spirit…
instead of envying you
if you were my daughter

I would have thrown you a freedom party
instead of blaming you for the divorce…
if you were my daughter

I would have seen your children as perfect in everyway
instead of filling your heart with doubt and worry…
if you were my daughter

I would let you know the pride I feel for you
instead of making you feel shame…
if you were my daughter

I would be your great defender
instead of your infector…
if you were my daughter

I would have taught you to love yourself
instead of not…
if you were my daughter

I would have but I am not your mother
instead I am no one’s mother…
I am simply a daughter

About the author

Creator of sounds. Poet on an energetic journey with words. Explorer of Frequencies.


 

Delaina J Miller

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  • Thank you Golda. You are my poem cheerleader and I need that right now. I go from feeling confident to scare as hell. It really helps to get your opinion.
    I love you,
    Delaina

  • I am tearing up and I love it so much. I am not sure which emotions you stirred up Delaina but I think as long as poetry does that you have done a great job!!

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