October 16

Painting Fall

Poetry

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Hello everyone;

I did say "haphazardly" participating in the April PAD Challenge. This is why day one is being posted after day two.
Day 1  prompt of "write an optimistic poem"

Not Dead Yet, Me


Is it really such a tragedy

that my sentences are raggedy

words tread together by similarity?

The conversation is still defiantly

expressions of me.


Is it really such a travesty 

that I wander aimlessly?

When I can travel through time so easily

…our life history

…a life lived outrageously.


Is it really such a disparity

that I have forgotten the melody

of your name? Still there’s some clarity….

I know the feelings of family

and passions intensity. 


Is it really such an indignity

that something once familiar is now a novelty.

Or that simple tasks escape me.

I still dance to life’s jamboree

and sing majestically.

Is it really such a finality

even as I become more absentee?

There is plenty of life in my legacy.

Don’t bother writing my eulogy,

when there’s still time to create a memory.

©2024 Delaina Miller

Painting Fall (A Sestina)

Summer’s refugees discarded, gathered,
and cradled in the arms of fall’s wind. Nuts
released and scattered among the purged leaves.
Horizons transformed from green hues to explosions of oranges
reds, and yellows against a dry,
crisp, blue sky. Wind whistling autumn a love song through the trees.

The swaying dance of shadows cast by trees
lifts even the most solemn spirit beyond its gathered
place. Summer’s seasonal inferno departs; the earth, dry
and humbled in its wake. Squirrels searching for nuts
frantically, under muted-orange,
brilliant-yellow, and plum-red leaves.

Autumn’s musky scent leaves
the scenes spinning, almost soring the tree
tops under the sun’s orange
glow. I lie down among the gathered
spoils of summer’s foliage. Like the nuts,
I too belong to the diaspora. Dry

eyed I accept my fate as I lie on the dry,
and hard bed of decaying leaves
that crunch beneath my weight. Like them and the nuts,
I have not fallen far from my tree
but fallen I am. Youth cannot be gathered
again in the fall of life. Memories of orange

dreamsicles cannot restore the elastic tan-orange
skin that has grown pale and dry.
Goals and dreams have been gathered,
raked, like fall’s dispelled leaves,
I’m no longer near the roots of my family’s tree.
I ponder my life, while I turn the acorn nut

in my hand over and over. Striped and nut
brown it is, in my no longer tanned-orange
hand. Yet we both rest under the trees,
spectators of fall’s grand entrance. Dry
but in no way dull, we lie together on a bed of golden leaves.
Passions, dreams, and courage formed and gathered.

We share the beauty of the trees, both in our cool but dry
state of being. The nuts that we are in our own brownish-orange
ways. In the lair of leaves, daydreams of life are heaped and gathered.

 

© Delaina Miller 2012

Shared with dVerse Poets Week 66

 

About the author

Creator of sounds. Poet on an energetic journey with words. Explorer of Frequencies.


 

Delaina J Miller

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    • Thank you Mohana;
      Fall turned out to be very colorful this year despite our drought calling for a celebration. 😉
      Cheers,
      Delaina

    • Laurie;
      Thank you. The form is new to me. I am glad to hear you think the enjambment works. I think I will play with this form a bit more next time, bend a few rules.
      Cheers,
      Delaina

  • Wind whistling autumn a love song through the trees….oh yes…i can understand the wind…autumn is a beautiful season and i whistle along…smiles

  • really nicely done to form….i love autumn so your connection with the tree…the laying in the leaves…the scent of decay it all brings it vividly to life for me…heap up those daydreams…smiles.

  • Oh, this is truly a wonderful autumn poem. Lovely and contemplative. Wouldn’t it be nice IF youth could be gathered again in the fall of life? And yes, I understand contemplating life while turning over the acorn in one’s hand. There is so much about life that one can learn from the seeds of fall. Nice meeting you here at dVerse. Thank you for visiting my blog as well. Smiles.

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