Planet’tude

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Image taken from: http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/hubble/science/pluto-20100204.html

Image taken from:
http://www.nasa.gov/mission_pages/hubble/science/pluto-20100204.html

Jupiter talking to Saturn

Planet’tude

Psst Saturn did you hear
Pluto’s back on the list.
Planet Power Baby!
Plucky little humans
Please! We’re not down with their
Planetary banter
Patronizing Panzóns.

I’m playing with the dVerse poets for meeting the bar. Vandana Sharma is teaching us a new (to me at least) form called Pleiades. It is great fun. The form has a one word title, seven lines that start with the same letter as the title and are six syllables long.

31 replies
  1. brian miller
    brian miller says:

    nice…love the kinda campy banter…you had fun with it…and rocked the form…ha…i doubt the planets worry too much on what we puny humans think…lol

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      I am so happy Pluto is back. It felt like my whole childhood was a lie when Pluto lost its planet status. (Just kidding.)

      Thanks for reading and for you comment. Cheers!

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Kathy;

      I had a lot of fun with this form and poem. I think I might have to step up my Thursday night game at the pub. 😉

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Thank you Bjorn! I am glad you like my fun attempt at the form. I enjoyed yours as well. Cheers!

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      I am glad you like the poem Vandana! It was such a fun night playing with this form. Thank you for hosting the party. 🙂

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Grace after I read yours, Bjorn, and Vandana’s I knew I would have to ditch my usual. Thanks for reading and commenting. Cheers!

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Yes Pluto is back! I am so glad you like this Rosemary and even more grateful that you invited me to join the dVerse group.

  2. Hannah Gosselin
    Hannah Gosselin says:

    Funny! I was just reading this today…I think I had heard and then forgot it though…I think it’d be a sad day for a planet to be stripped of its title. 🙂

    • Delaina
      Delaina says:

      Hey Hannah thanks for reading and commenting. I agree thank goodness Pluto is a planet again 😉

  3. CC
    CC says:

    Very clever and so much fun. This made me laugh and is written with such attitude that I will still be chuckling about it hours from now, I’m sure. Thanks 🙂

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