Hello everyone;
I did say "haphazardly" participating in the April PAD Challenge. This is why day one is being posted after day two.
Day 1 prompt of "write an optimistic poem"
Not Dead Yet, Me
Is it really such a tragedy
that my sentences are raggedy
words tread together by similarity?
The conversation is still defiantly
expressions of me.
Is it really such a travesty
that I wander aimlessly?
When I can travel through time so easily
…our life history
…a life lived outrageously.
Is it really such a disparity
that I have forgotten the melody
of your name? Still there’s some clarity….
I know the feelings of family
and passions intensity.
Is it really such an indignity
that something once familiar is now a novelty.
Or that simple tasks escape me.
I still dance to life’s jamboree
and sing majestically.
Is it really such a finality
even as I become more absentee?
There is plenty of life in my legacy.
Don’t bother writing my eulogy,
when there’s still time to create a memory.
©2024 Delaina Miller
Natural Reflections
I stand facing the sun that winter chills
an icy tempest lifts stands of my hair
and slaps my cheeks.
Nature and I catch our breath
in our joint hibernation and meditation.
I prefer spring’s dramatic winds
and autumn’s colorful flare
to summer’s feverish wrath
and winter’s neglectful blight.
Our nature is to thrive unconditionally.
The tree needs our breath
bartering it’s shade and heat.
I understand I am no more important
than the yellow in a Flicker’s tail
no more worthy than the ant.
Though my shoe is small
my footprint is larger than most.
So great the responsibilities,
the bond between inhabitants
to take the rough with the smooth.
beautifully put…”Our nature is to thrive unconditionally.” so true…
Thank you Sumana!
Feeding Nature
giving back
what takes of
us.. Loving We
Feeding uS
Nature’s
Breath..
Life
Blood
oxyGen..
Tree of Life..:)
Lovely!
A thoughtful, sobering poem. Good imagery.
Thank you Shirley. 🙂
This certainly leads me to the feeling of responsibility for the other inhabitants of our planet.
Thank you for reading Georgina! Cheers!
I like your comparison between our small shoes and our large footprints, oh so true, and our insignificance to the trees.
Gayle ~
Thank you Gayle! 🙂
So much to love here.. The shared breath, our mutual dependence and how footprints of the scavenger might marr the soil.
Thank you Bjorn for reading and for your comment!
We like to think that we are so important, but you remind us that we need to consider the other inhabitants of this planet as equally deserving to be here.
Cheers Bryan! Thank you for reading. 🙂
Very beautiful. And so true….our feet are small, but our ecological footprint way too huge. Good one.
Hello Sherry! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Ta!
I like you. You have really good energy.
“Nature and I catch our breath
in our joint hibernation and meditation.”
“Our nature is to thrive unconditionally.”
Wonderful messages throughout, but these touch me the deepest.
I am glad you think I have good energy, that is always nice to know. Thank you for reading and commenting, Cheers!
Learning to see how we impact the earth is a very important idea. You expressed it well.
Thank you Suzanne! 🙂
A not s gentle warning & nudge to our conscience; well said, clever wordsmithing . I li,ke the lines /I am no more important/than the yellow in a Flicker’s tail/no more worthy than the ant/.
Thank you Glenn! I am glad you like the poem. Cheers!
You’ve given us some wonderful images, Delaina–I especially like:
Nature and I catch our breath
in our joint hibernation and meditation.
Thank you Victoria. I am glad you like the poem and those lines. Cheers!
Lovely write. I like the blend of meditation and hibernation that led to these provocaive thoughts. So nice to read.
Thank you Myrna! Cheers!
The tree needs our breath
bartering it’s shade and heat.
Beautiful lines 😀
Thank you Sanaa! I am glad you like those lines. Cheers!
I love the communion with nature ~ This part just resonated with me strongly about our responsibility:
Though my shoe is small
my footprint is larger than most.
Thanks for joining us Delaine and wishing you a good week ~
Thank you Grace for hosting tonight! The prompt was great fun. Cheers!
I think each of us needs to recognize the size of our footprints! We ALL, every living thing among us, wish to thrive!
So true Mary! Thank you for stopping by and leaving your comment. Cheers!
I love this gathered, shared breath between earth and poet. Wonderful.
PS: My full maiden name is DeLinda J. (JoAnne) Miller. Your signature made me look twice. 😉
My grandmother’s maiden name was Jackson so the coincidence continues. 🙂 My middle name is Jean by the way 😉
Thank you DeLinda! So great to see you here again. Thanks for leaving your comments.